JOHN LOOK AT THIS TO PUT IN FINAL DRAFT!!!

i hope you get this comment, you prob wont. for the sentence in my section(third paragraph) that we though was confusing. i tryed rewriting it,

Zamyatin attempts to give this idea of balance in society by creating a scale, and depending on what is hapening in the society, the scale may tip towards security or towards civil liberties.

it combines two sentences, the sentences it combines are in the last part of my analysis on my first quote, and the sentence just before introducing the second quote. I REALLY HOPE YOU GET THIS, because it sounds alot better